Remedial Piece

I found a poem I wrote about a year ago and decided to recreate it as a video without text.

This poem was very personal, and the way it translated to video shows that. But I still wanted to revise it, so no judgments please!

Here it is!

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Author: Ellie

I'm an aspiring novelist just trying to write.

4 thoughts on “Remedial Piece”

  1. Wow. That was immensely personal and immensely powerful and I commend you for using this poem as your remediation piece. As I watched your video, I got the chills; that is how adding images and video can be can be immensely effective next to or with a piece of text. Additionally, I thought that the way you read your poem in a slower manner helped provide a more powerful tone as well. Nicely done!

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  2. This was a very powerful piece and I commend you for sharing it. I think the video that you added with the poem was extremely effective in evoking emotion. I know when I watched it I got chills and was very captivated. I also think the lack of background noise and the loudness of your voice enhanced the tone of the poem.

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    1. You did an amazing job putting this video together! It’s so admirable that you were able to share all of these personal feelings. I could sense your emotions through the tone of your voice as well as the video clips you encorporated.

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  3. I really enjoyed how you decided to remediate this piece because I feel like the audio and the images in the video made it that much more powerful. These things definitely gave your poem more depth and more meaning. I was very captivated the entire time – it was very well done!!

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